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The Empty Bucket

Subliminally Thoughtless Poetry Challenge

Poem written

by cruelkindness

Title of Poem "The Empty Bucket" created by

by rosemay50



The Empty Bucket

theemptybucket

I carry a desire to live a life full of desires.


Determined, I spend my whole life

until to reach these wants.


I remain unsatisfied-confused knowing I have this desire.


I feel the waste of time rising to the top of my end.


I try to demand satisfaction in this living desire.


Continuous time flows near the rim full of emptiness.


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Leaving me with no desire in the choice of moments.


I am longing with lack of time for this fulfillment.


Crazy knowing I have what yearns for such satisfaction.


Here I stay, unsatisfied results to remain desired for satisfaction.

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Comments

BeyondMax from Sydney, Australia on May 31, 2012:

An interesting one, love the deep thoughts, it is never that simple, isn't it.

cruelkindness (author) from an angle view. on May 25, 2012:

C-o-r-r-e-c-t!!!!!

"Johnny, tell em what they won"

Super badly awesome

Thank you Veronwe for putting some compliments in my cereal.

Cruelkindness (Subliminally Thoughtless)

Voronwe on May 25, 2012:

Well, I always run out of words when it comes to describing your work - always a creative anomaly!

Great words- how Desire is connected to Life in the system of Time. Desire that just won't fill your life because it cannot be filled itself and always seems empty, aiming for more.

I applaud thee!

HandGun from Here Taking Over on May 25, 2012:

This is one of my favorites... I really like this poem...

Handgun

dialogue on May 24, 2012:

I like the above hub, well written. Good work.

Audrey Howitt from California on May 24, 2012:

I love the personification of desire--and love the picture as well!

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on May 24, 2012:

Everyone wants to fill-up the emptiness they have inside.

kjforce from Florida on May 24, 2012:

cool picture..like the take on desire representing the empty bucket..

Rosemary Sadler from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand on May 23, 2012:

A very interesting take on 'the Empty Bucket'

Awesome picture.

Thank you for the poem and the link

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