Poem - Zulus Revenge

I had only just thought

of Zulus revenge

when the siren sounded

signalling government displeasure

more visits from the Culture Police

turning out the old notebooks

looking for my hidden thoughts

advancing armies ambling aimless

fierce black warriors lost on the burning page

their revolution revoked, redundant..

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Comments

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on January 21, 2008:

Iðunn thanks very much...

Iðunn on January 21, 2008:

"fierce black warriors lost on the burning page" ... beautiful. I could see them.

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on January 21, 2008:

take a moment people, ask yourself what more can I do ?