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Poem - Falling Falling

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I found this image browsing and it stayed with me and probably will for a long time... here is a little poem....

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I fell from the sky

was I alien or another jesus nuisance

but where was mama and papa

I cried and cried for them

but they did not fall

now it is me, just me,

at nights I wonder why I came from the sky

did mama and papa land somewhere else

sometimes I am so alone

I wish to fly

in the sky

and be no-one,

nobody, nothing......

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Comments

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on August 21, 2009:

thanks Brenda.. I never ever found out and yes it bothered me as do many of the images I see all around me.. perhaps this why poets die (relatively) young.. lol...

\Brenda Scully on August 21, 2009:

hope the child landed safely..... it must have bothered you at the time to write about it nicely done

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on April 03, 2009:

Hey Cindy thanks for the comment, they probably lived happily ever after,  (but on the ground floor) this is what I need to believe... Drax

Cindy Letchworth from Midwest, U.S.A. on April 03, 2009:

The picture is very thought provoking isn't it? One wonders what happened after the fall....

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on January 14, 2009:

Hi Gabe, thanks very much for the comment, this was one of those pictures that stop you...

Gabe Dorn from China on January 03, 2009:

Love the falling poem and the simple structure of it!

des donnelly (author) from Co Tyrone.... on March 19, 2008:

this must mean that Marmalade floats....Mr M ...*laughs*

MrMarmalade from Sydney on March 19, 2008:

I can fall over a match stick.

I am impressed that I am still in thje marmalade. I thought better and better would have pushed to the bottom of the pile

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