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Thoughts Along The Way

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You sit there and think and think some more

Life is like a revolving door

You inquire on how much more can you endure

But persistent is the mind that continues to walk through the door


You go to work you pay the bills

Time never waits

You have to do this and this

Everything is such a hassle or a debate


Take a second to breath and to think

Am I happy with the way I live

I only get one chance to live this life

So I shall live it as if my last days are near


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Comments

torrilynn (author) on December 19, 2014:

@jandee I agree that we should be more like our pets and live life with no worries. and thanks for reading my hub.

jandee from Liverpool.U.K on November 13, 2014:

We should be more like our pets and live in the now-no worries just enjoyment ! If only!

Thank you for allowing us to stop and think awhile !

best regards from jandee/

torrilynn (author) on November 12, 2014:

@CrisSp I couldn't agree more. Thanks for reading my hub.

CrisSp from Sky Is The Limit Adventure on July 05, 2014:

torrilynn: I feel you. Guess, we should slow down a bit and try to smell the flowers. They're blooming these days at their best anyway. Cheers to life!

Lynn Jones from USA on June 27, 2014:

Excellent and precise poem, thanks for sharing this one, voted up

torrilynn (author) on June 27, 2014:

@DDE I thank you for your warm words.

torrilynn (author) on June 27, 2014:

@ubanichijioke thanks for reading my poem and it is true to self reflect and to live life as if tomorrow isn't promised. Thanks for your positive words.

torrilynn (author) on June 27, 2014:

@aviannovice I'm glad you liked my poem and that's the way to going about living life.

Deb Hirt from Stillwater, OK on June 27, 2014:

I try to live every day like it is my last. Great poem.

Alexander Thandi Ubani from Lagos on June 27, 2014:

Thought-provoking piece. I love it...

wait, think; then ask 'the way I am living my life now, is it worth it?'

You are doing well.

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on June 27, 2014:

Beautiful thoughts!

torrilynn (author) on June 26, 2014:

@teaches12345 it is very true, tomorrow is never promised.

Dianna Mendez on June 26, 2014:

This is great inspiration to live life to the fullest every day.

torrilynn (author) on June 25, 2014:

@PeggyW thanks for commenting and it is very true we should love our lives as if it's our last days.

torrilynn (author) on June 25, 2014:

@FrankAtancio I'm glad you enjoyed my hub, thanks.

torrilynn (author) on June 25, 2014:

@tobusiness thanks for liking my poetry and I'm glad you loved my message. Life should be appreciated and enjoyed overall.

torrilynn (author) on June 25, 2014:

@janshares thanks for voting my poem up and I'm glad that you liked it

Janis Leslie Evans from Washington, DC on June 25, 2014:

You speak truth, torrilynn, to which most can relate. I can use this poetic advice myself, always running. A nice meditation and how we need to get our priorities straight and live like there's no tomorrow. Voted up and useful.

Jo Alexis-Hagues from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 25, 2014:

Beautiful poetry. We often get so caught-up in doing what we feel we need to do for a better life, we forget how to live, and soon it's just too late. I love the message.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on June 24, 2014:

tori, I enjoyed ur thoughts along the way :)

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on June 24, 2014:

We should always live our life as if our last days are upon us because it could be the truth. None of us knows when our time is up. All we can do is to make the best of each day and the time that we are given.

torrilynn (author) on June 23, 2014:

@Torrs13 I thank you for commenting on my hub and I believe that we move at such a fast pace that we don't even sit down to enjoy what we have and enjoy the company of the people that love us.

Tori Canonge from North Carolina on June 22, 2014:

Beautifully written. I think a lot of times we get caught up in our every day lives and we forget to take a look at the little things around us. It's important that we take notice of even the smallest blessings and opportunities in our lives so that we don't take anything for granted and we don't miss a chance to do something great. Our culture teaches us that work is the most important thing because we have to have money to survive. Although this is true, we also need to have a life that we enjoy and that inspires us to do great things.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@MsDora thanks for enjoying my poem, I thank you for stopping by.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@billybuc thank you for understanding my message and for stopping by.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@Vellur thank you for your positive words.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@d.wiliam I couldn't agree more. Thanks for reading my poem, I really do appreciate you stopping by.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@jhamann thank you for sharing my poem with others and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@NellRose I thank you for your positivity and thoughtful words. I am glad that you stopped by.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@Ebonny I thank you for understanding my message. Thanks for stopping along and reading.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@LadyFiddler you are more than welcome and I thank you for commenting.

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@GypsyRoseLee thanks for the positive feedback and for understanding my message

torrilynn (author) on June 22, 2014:

@janetwrites I appreciate your comment thank you :)

Janet Giessl from Georgia country on June 22, 2014:

Very beautiful and inspiring. Wise words.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on June 22, 2014:

Voted up. Creatively expressed. We should live each day to the fullest.

Joanna Chandler from On Planet Earth on June 21, 2014:

Hi Torrilyn , thanks for your short sweet poem :)

Have a bless weekend

Ebonny from UK on June 21, 2014:

Your short poem promotes a far reaching and wise sentiment in that we should not take things for granted and simply coast along as if we have all the time in the world. Life is short.

Nell Rose from England on June 20, 2014:

Wonderful poem torrilynn, and yes we should all take time out and just sit and think, and maybe get a good perspective on life, wonderful!

Jamie Lee Hamann from Reno NV on June 20, 2014:

Inspiring poetry, thank you for sharing. Jamie

d.william from Somewhere in the south on June 20, 2014:

Great poem, great sentiment. How wonderful life would be in we could all view our lives as if it would end tomorrow. We should learn to enjoy our life and be thankful for each day we have on this planet instead of worrying about what someone else does with theirs.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on June 20, 2014:

Beautifully expressed, wise words.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on June 19, 2014:

Lovely thoughts and very true. Few people actually live like they are running out of time. They think that time is infinite....until they find out the hard way. I live by your philosophy and I love life.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on June 19, 2014:

Torrilyn, the thoughts never end, but we have to take a time out, as you suggested, to breathe. I can identify with the sentiments in your beautiful lines.

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