Spark in Your Eyes - a Poem
Rinita is a creative writer, with focus on poetry. She delves into several forms including Haiku/Senryu, Sonnets, Free Verse, and Prose.
Background
For once, I am not explaining my poem. This is an "As you like it" poem.
Sparkling eyes
The Poem
Dew on a rose petal
Sunshine on the sill
A merry tune in passing
A cloud over the hill
The spark in your eyes
Mystically glows along
Shadows of the flecks
That the gleam beautifies
Wind over the ocean
The wild exotic Eden
Gulls flying low and swift
Chastity of a maiden
The spark in your eyes
Sets ablaze all sin
Glitters turn to gold
As the flame never dies
The path to paradise
The touch of an angel
The rising ceremony
The flute of a miracle
The spark in your eyes
Leads me to the light
Of a blissful eternity
Where a soul never cries
© 2012 Rinita Sen
Comments
manatita44 from london on November 05, 2020:
Whether you explain it or not, it's still amazing poetry. Exquisite and sublime! What a visual tapestry of colours!! Kudos to you, Rinita ji.
Rinita Sen (author) on November 04, 2020:
Thanks Vishal
Vishal Kaushik on November 02, 2020:
Nice.
Rinita Sen (author) on August 21, 2012:
LOL. Good one!!
Chris Mills from Traverse City, MI on August 21, 2012:
I don't know why that impulse came to me but I had Lucinda Williams doing the vocals. Way too weird, I know.
Rinita Sen (author) on August 21, 2012:
That's a very interesting comment cam8510! As I read your comment, I tried to rap those lines I wrote above!!!
Thanks for reading, have a nice day!
Chris Mills from Traverse City, MI on August 21, 2012:
As I read this, I was remembering going to a poetry "reading" and being surprised. The authors were also performers. They "read" their works, but often very aggressively. Reading yours, I found myself reading it almost as hip hop or rap, with and aggressiveness. That may sound strange, but it fit pretty well for me. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Rinita Sen (author) on August 20, 2012:
Thanks again Shruti. I am glad you feel that way about my poetry.
shruti sheshadri from Bangalore, India on August 19, 2012:
I am reading all your poems and I am astounded at its simplicity and yet it has such deep meaning...
The spark in your eyes
Sets ablaze all sin
Glitters turn to gold
As the flame never dies
Beautiful... Truly :)
IntegrityYes on July 25, 2012:
You are very welcome,awesome lady.
Rinita Sen (author) on July 25, 2012:
Thanks a million for your vote. Glad you liked it.
IntegrityYes on July 25, 2012:
I definitely voted up! That is another awesome one.
Rinita Sen (author) on July 12, 2012:
Thanks a lot penny. Happy you liked it.
pennyofheaven from New Zealand on July 12, 2012:
Elegantly beautiful. Thank you
Rinita Sen (author) on July 09, 2012:
Thank you Lot. Glad you liked it.
Rinita Sen (author) on July 09, 2012:
Thank you Debbie. Have a blessed day.
Lot Rillera from Philippines on July 09, 2012:
lovely and beautiful ! good work
Deborah Brooks Langford from Brownsville,TX on July 09, 2012:
It is beautiful just the way it is.. I LOVE IT...
Blessings and sharing
Debbie
Rinita Sen (author) on June 23, 2012:
Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed it.
tippusunu from India on June 23, 2012:
oh, that was great, i really love you writing, thanks
Rinita Sen (author) on June 15, 2012:
Thank you Lady. Glad you liked it.
Joanna Chandler from On Planet Earth on June 15, 2012:
Very lovely Poem
Peace be unto you
~~~Shalom~~~
Rinita Sen (author) on May 20, 2012:
Thank you lyricwriter for your kind comment. Am glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a great day!
Richard Ricky Hale from West Virginia on May 20, 2012:
Senoritaa, beautiful poem. You truly have a way with words, such a great talent. Great work.
Rinita Sen (author) on May 15, 2012:
Thank you Frank. Glad you liked it. Have a wonderful day.
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 15, 2012:
Senoritaa you just made beauty stand still I loved it!!!
Rinita Sen (author) on May 11, 2012:
Thank you Audrey. Glad to see you today.
Audrey Howitt from California on May 11, 2012:
Beautiful pairing of verse and picture---
Rinita Sen (author) on May 08, 2012:
Thank you writer20. So glad you liked it.
Joyce Haragsim from Southern Nevada on May 08, 2012:
Wonderful poem to read about nature and love.
Vote up and beautiful.
Rinita Sen (author) on May 08, 2012:
Thanks a lot Sue. Glad to see you today.
Sueswan on May 08, 2012:
Hi Senoritaa
Beautiful and precious. Lovely imagery.
Voted up and away
Take care :)
Rinita Sen (author) on April 27, 2012:
Thank you for that generous comment, Robert. I am glad you liked it.
rOBERT hEWETT SR. from Louisville, Kentucky on April 27, 2012:
Beautiful imagery, rhythm and flow. I love the spark in your writing. Bob
Rinita Sen (author) on April 26, 2012:
Thanks sofs for thinking so. Am glad you liked this one. You have a great day too.
Rinita Sen (author) on April 26, 2012:
Thanks a lot Phoebe for that priceless comment. Have a wonderful day!
Sophie on April 25, 2012:
Oh wow... what a reminder of this beautiful world and beyond... Love and heaven in your words. Have a lovely day.
Phoebe Pike on April 25, 2012:
A work of art in every way a poem ever could be! Two thumbs way up. ^_^
Rinita Sen (author) on April 23, 2012:
You are right in saying that love is as beautiful as nature. Thank you Rosemay!
Rosemary Sadler from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand on April 22, 2012:
Sweet and lovely and lighthearted. Love is as enduring and beautiful as nature itself.
Loved your poem
Rinita Sen (author) on April 22, 2012:
Thank you Vinaya for that beautiful comment. I am glad my poem could do that. Have a nice day!
Rinita Sen (author) on April 22, 2012:
Thank you Raci, I am glad I chose the right pictures. Have a great day!
Vinaya Ghimire from Nepal on April 22, 2012:
I see the beautiful world through your wonderful composition.
raciniwa from Talisay City, Cebu on April 22, 2012:
what a beautiful and inspiring poem...love this Senoritaa...the views are awesome as well...
Rinita Sen (author) on April 21, 2012:
Thank you my HP friend. You said it all. :)
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on April 21, 2012:
You've described the beauty of nature, a true love, and perhaps heaven..Beautiful...
