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She Laid


She walked through the doorway

As I sat up in bed

Thoughts of our wild night

Spinning in my head

Like a cat gliding towards me

As I watched her hips sway

With her mouth still hung open

Her eyes still in loves haze

Her soul purring like a kitten

On my chest she laid

Coiling all around me

Two bodies became one

In a world of passion

Beneath the rising sun


Jon (author) from UK on December 08, 2012:

Epi you do me greater honour still ......i am so thilled to have you read my work I have an image of you next to your lake with coffe in hand and it gives me a huge boost at the end of a major year of my life , thank you so much !!!!

Send you all of my wishes and positive energy from across the pond 13.16pm


epigramman on December 08, 2012:

....very very seductive - the ladies will love this - well actually the lady in me loved it - as I often try to write from the female point of view.

Your heart and mind is purely poetic - this is a talent you can't teach - you were just born with it. lake erie time ontario canada 8:10am

and sending you warm wishes ......

Jon (author) from UK on October 13, 2012:


that's all I have to say too

surya on October 13, 2012:

jon i ve no words u made me coy.. tat poem was jus awsm.... loved it....

Jon (author) from UK on October 10, 2012:

Thanks Cleaner3 :)

Great comment


cleaner3 from Pueblo, Colorado on October 10, 2012:

beautiful love poetry

I love this sensuous write .

it fits all my criteria

love short and sweet words

Jon (author) from UK on October 10, 2012:

Some people seem to get that lucky Shauna, always a friend of a friends cousin or something never us lol

Give it a go anyway in it !!!

Love Simba xxx

Shauna L Bowling from Central Florida on October 10, 2012:

Oh, if only life could stay the way love begins!

Jon (author) from UK on October 10, 2012:

Thanks GRL ,

Love you dropping by as usual :)))

Love Simba xxx

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on October 10, 2012:

Voted up and beautiful. Let the sun shine for love.

Jon (author) from UK on October 09, 2012:

Coffee thanks so much, creepy ha!!! love it !!!

Simba xxx

Marites Mabugat-Simbajon from Toronto, Ontario on October 09, 2012:

Oh man, I could see you both, and that's a creepy situation for me, lol!


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