Space that I have chosen
One might not care to notice
Hot summer breezes
Darkness exchanges places with light
Stale liquor morning drinks
She floated into my space
With the deadbeats and the rowdies
Intensity and sweet demore
Eyes silent as stars
A goddess demanding attention
She feeds herself to my heart
Measuring elements of flavor
I have to run-have to flee
Before fate does its part
And I am left
- Love is an addiction sequestered in the heart demanding satisfaction.
Assess the roads that you travel. The mental force of love liberates the soul. Good in the world is increased when your actions benefit others. Look at all matters of the heart with encouraging and compromising attitudes.
Rudy Lopez (author) from Pleasantan Tx. on February 11, 2016:
Thank you Dana Tate, I went through this one time so I put it into words.
Dana Tate from LOS ANGELES on February 11, 2016:
Beautiful words. I loved it.
Rudy Lopez (author) from Pleasantan Tx. on February 05, 2016:
Thank you jgshorebird
manatita44 from london on February 05, 2016:
Again a loving Hub and write. Wish you all success, Rudy. Dios te bendiga Y acompane. Hasta La proxima!
jgshorebird on February 05, 2016:
My favorite line is "Eyes silent as stars."
Rudy Lopez (author) from Pleasantan Tx. on February 04, 2016:
Thank you lady guitarpicker glad you enjoyed it.
stella vadakin from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619 on February 04, 2016:
Very different, but I like the style.
moonlake from America on February 02, 2016:
Enjoyed your poem.
Al Wordlaw from Chicago on January 29, 2016:
Pretty cool piece of poetry.
Shaloo Walia from India on January 29, 2016:
Rudy Lopez (author) from Pleasantan Tx. on January 29, 2016:
Thank you Missy Smith your opinion means a lot to me.
Missy Smith from Florida on January 29, 2016:
I like the exchange of words in this one. They seem to flip a different beat but bouncing off each other. I hope that makes sense? It's how I interpreted it while reading it. Very unique!