Reflections of You
My name is William and I have been writing poetry and lyrics for so many years. I'd like to be published and accomplished writer.
Reflections of You
Standing in a line of mine
That we have been scared to see
A vision, lost among a dream
Longing for a women
A women like you, I’m begging
So I scream a delicate desire
We both mourn for
As we sit here soaking up the rain
Reflections of you dawning
Shinning down upon me the pain
So unfeathered, just so full of you
I’ve reflected upon who you are many times
I’m scared to say, and to see
Again I will never follow you
None of the words you use are true
We laughed, we cried together
And still it means nothing to you
I reflect the fears of pain
That will haunt me for eternity
As I sit and dwell, begging
To remember a women you are
We suffered together
Tears flow down among my jaw line
Cause now I can only dream
Of the women you were
So desirable I scream from the
Reflections of you..
© 2009 Dom Shadows
Comments
Dom Shadows (author) from Zanesville, Ohio on May 06, 2010:
Billy-- thank you so much. I'm glad you like..
Reign- Thanks for the kind words and Im glad you liked it.. ~hugs back at ya~
blackreign2012 on April 28, 2010:
I loved it so much I read it again... rated you up Dom ~hugs~
getmyback on April 28, 2010:
Dom, you got it going on
keep writing
cause I'll never stop reading
Thank you
billY
Dom Shadows (author) from Zanesville, Ohio on April 25, 2010:
Thanks girl I appreciate that. About the hug I mean.. =) TY
blackreign2012 on April 24, 2010:
I love your style of writing ~hugs~ Glad im a fan
Katrina_26 from Seward, Pa on March 30, 2010:
Thanks for the response. I happen to love free style writing! it allows me to express my innermost soul
Dim Flaxenwick from Great Britain on December 09, 2009:
Words fail me with this one . I have tears. You have a new fan.
christalluna1124 from Dallas Texas on November 27, 2009:
As I said before....beautiful and very deep.
