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Reflections of You

My name is William and I have been writing poetry and lyrics for so many years. I'd like to be published and accomplished writer.

Reflections of You

Standing in a line of mine

That we have been scared to see

A vision, lost among a dream

Longing for a women

A women like you, I’m begging

So I scream a delicate desire

We both mourn for

As we sit here soaking up the rain

Reflections of you dawning

Shinning down upon me the pain

So unfeathered, just so full of you

I’ve reflected upon who you are many times

I’m scared to say, and to see

Again I will never follow you

None of the words you use are true

We laughed, we cried together

And still it means nothing to you

I reflect the fears of pain

That will haunt me for eternity

As I sit and dwell, begging

To remember a women you are

We suffered together

Tears flow down among my jaw line

Cause now I can only dream

Of the women you were

So desirable I scream from the

Reflections of you..

© 2009 Dom Shadows

Comments

Dom Shadows (author) from Zanesville, Ohio on May 06, 2010:

Billy-- thank you so much. I'm glad you like..

Reign- Thanks for the kind words and Im glad you liked it.. ~hugs back at ya~

blackreign2012 on April 28, 2010:

I loved it so much I read it again... rated you up Dom ~hugs~

getmyback on April 28, 2010:

Dom, you got it going on

keep writing

cause I'll never stop reading

Thank you

billY

Dom Shadows (author) from Zanesville, Ohio on April 25, 2010:

Thanks girl I appreciate that. About the hug I mean.. =) TY

blackreign2012 on April 24, 2010:

I love your style of writing ~hugs~ Glad im a fan

Katrina_26 from Seward, Pa on March 30, 2010:

Thanks for the response. I happen to love free style writing! it allows me to express my innermost soul

Dim Flaxenwick from Great Britain on December 09, 2009:

Words fail me with this one . I have tears. You have a new fan.

christalluna1124 from Dallas Texas on November 27, 2009:

As I said before....beautiful and very deep.