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Once They Let Go

Philosophy vlogger, painter, poetry writer, dog lover. I write for my self, i'm happy to share it with you.


Behold, the love that was once adored like the colors of the canvas, strong paintings on walls I believe will endure.

I've seen the brightest horizon in his eyes, in silence imploring sight which slowly drowning in times.

Listen to it's voice, where once I adored, haltingly fading, - a vaulted infliction of bitterness.

Pouring rain, leaves fell, gloomy skies every droplets touches my skin retrospect of a changing times.

In silence saddened lying on a sofa, colors of the paintings are slowly fading, droplets on my skin feels like abandoned blasted old times.

What could a good memories do if there's nonexistence to hold? And the love once he gave, i bury all alone.

Bloodied and bruised everything was ruined desolate by his shadow.

Thought I was ready, I hear his tone - a gasp of moving on.

Once he let go, still- you wouldn't be ready.


BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on October 22, 2020:

Heartfelt words.

One is never ready when one leaves...the gasps echoes within our mind forever.

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Nice write.

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on September 18, 2020:

Ah keep on calling my name like a baby ^_^ ! Thanks for the love 'te Nel a bunge bunge of love

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on August 28, 2020:

Hey Ms Vandna !! Thank you a bunge for the feedback. I'm super grateful !

God bless you and your fam.

thoughtsprocess from Navsari (India) on August 28, 2020:

Hi Chrish,

Heart touching poem. Beautifully penned.

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on August 24, 2020:

Hey there Sannyasi!

Thanks a bunge for reading.yeah I'm sure you know the feeling right?

Take care you all out there in India.

Sannyasi Raja from Durgapur, West Bengal, India on August 24, 2020:

Deep. Touched my heart

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