On angels wings
Her soul takes flight
Across the moon
Into the night
Upon the wind
Her spirit has fled
Free from the pain
Disease had bred.
Her soul is in flight
She is heading for home
In free easy grace
Will her spirit now roam
Heartbreak and sadness
No longer exist
She is floating upward
Into heavenly mists
Across the stars
Her soul takes flight
She drifts ever farther
From our sights
She's going home
She'll cry no more tears
Released from the worry
Released from the fear.
Across the dawn
Her soul flies on
A shadow of pink
Greets the rising sun
Her heart is light
Her spirit is free
She soars ever upward
Toward eternal peace
Bound to the earth
An anguished cry
We have no wings
We cannot fly
Blinded by grief
As she departs
Leaving only her memory
Within our hearts.
© 2011 Kristen Burns-Darling
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on August 31, 2012:
@Cshasong - I am so sorry for your loss, I watched my own grandparents struggle with the loss of their only child, my mother, and learned early that a child should never go before the parent, it is just not in the natural order of things. I am glad that you were able to find something akin to comfort in the words that I wrote. Thank you for the gift of your time, and for your very gracious comments, they are both welcomed and deeply appreciated.
Cshasong on August 30, 2012:
As a daughterless mother, your poem resonates with me. It's only been 3 and a half years since my loss and I have yet to be able to capture the feelings with words. You did, so beautifully and eloquently.
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on December 31, 2011:
@Poohgranma - Awwww Sherry! You must have seen my FB post this morning. Thank you for the generosity of your time and for you friendship, they are so very welcomed and appreciated! I will probably message you later today, but if perchance I don't, I wish you and Gary and your family the happiest and most blessed of New Years!
Poohgranma from On the edge on December 31, 2011:
I'll repeat what I said when I read it many months ago and add what a glorious talent you have for tender, loving tributes to all that you write about.
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on July 12, 2011:
@Valerie - Thank you so much for the generosity of your time and your comments, they are always welcomed and appreciated!
Valerie on July 12, 2011:
I just love this poem..
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on May 06, 2011:
@gg.zaino - I am humbled by your kindness, thank you so much for taking the time to read this, it is greatly appreciated. My poetry is different from anything else that I write, as it just comes mostly on it's own, from somewhere inside of my heart. Since around the time that my mom got sick, and then subsequently passed away, it has mostly been my way of coping or dealing. Thanks again!
greg g zaino from L'America- Big Pine Key, Florida on May 06, 2011:
K- well done. Voted 'Up' on this one.
I have found that the more i write about loss it fades away more quickly and becomes no more. By writing I unburden myself.
Poetry is the art feeling, imagery and fine words. I believe you have all three components here K.
peace my friend- greg
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on February 12, 2011:
epigramman - You say the nicest things! Thank you so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read my work. I will be sure to take a look at that film. Thank you again.
epigramman on February 12, 2011:
...well I have a soft spot for angels so I am glad that I have met a person who writes like one .....and one of my favorite films - Wings of Desire by Wm Wenders (check it out on You Tube) is a story about angels and their inner conflicts with mankind.
I really enjoyed the way you 'ascended' poetically speaking through the course of this piece - as if I was flying high too - well actually I was - after reading this!
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on February 05, 2011:
Healing Touch - Thank you very much for your kind words, I am glad that you enjoyed this piece.
Laura Arne from Minnetonka, MN on February 05, 2011:
My eyes are all misty after this one. Great poem, your very talented
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on February 02, 2011:
PR Morgan - Thank-you for your kind words.
PR Morgan from Sarasota Florida on February 02, 2011:
A beautiful description of someone's passing on to a new world....
sandy27m on January 18, 2011:
You have potrayed sensitivity of the departed soul beautifully! I should say awesome!
Jaggedfrost on January 17, 2011:
Hmm this feels like someone died. I am sorry you lost your mother. I understood that much before my lazy brain was willing to read your comment. Well done and expressed.
Dawn on January 16, 2011:
Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 15, 2011:
Wow! Thank you everyone! When I woke up this morning, I didn't expect such an overwhelming response to something that it has taken me thrity-two plus years to complete, and that in the end is really just the interpretation of something.....(I don't know exactly what to call it...a dream? a vision? an idea? ) in any case, a picture that was created by, and then stored in my mental photo album, by my eleven year old self. This poem and I, we have shared a long and winding history that began with my mother's death at age 40 from metastic ovarian cancer in October of 1978, until now. Going through a box of my old journals recently rediscovered in my father's garage, I found it's earliest unfinished version scribbled across an otherwise blank page in my journal from November of that year. It's various unfinished incarnations are subsequently scribbled throughout my journals since then, as I would occasionally pull it out and adding and subtracting lines, attempt and then fail to paint exactly the picture that I saw in my head. Last night, for some unknown reason, it just finally all fell into place. For whatever it is worth, this is what I saw in my mind's eye, or in my dreams, or my imagination, (still at a loss as to what to call it..) on the day that my mother died. This is the picture that I have been struggling to share ever since my poor father had to tell his eleven and nine year old daughters that Mommy had gone to heaven. So while it is very special to me, I truly didn't expect that it would draw such a response, and I am humbled by your gracious and lovely words! Thank-you.
Time2shine from Cardiff on January 15, 2011:
i really love this, so amazing.
chspublish from Ireland on January 15, 2011:
The soul's flight - how beautiful is your description and with such hope also. Thanks for the writing.
ahorseback on January 15, 2011:
K Burns Darling, I think this is a trip for all angels , there are so many , too many ! I love the way you wrote this!And the picture wow!!!
Poohgranma from On the edge on January 14, 2011:
Completely breathtaking - you almost make her journey sound too inviting. This is a work of art!
Delinda on January 14, 2011:
This is beautiful.