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Mirror: A Poem

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I'm a dental hygienist, pyrography artist, avid gardener, writer, vegetarian, world traveler, and many other things!

Mirror


I've seen

Tender affections sweet as perfume;

Belated beauty in full-blossomed bloom;

Fresh, new love without ripple or seam,

Burning and brilliant as a hot laser beam.


I've seen

Cold silence when the love has died;

Beauty replaced by scorn and pride;

Broken promises and gnawing despair;

Shattered dreams beyond repair.

© 2011 Kate P

Comments

Melanie from Wisconsin on March 27, 2020:

Absolutely exquisite....brought tears to my eyes. Very skillfully and thoughtfully written.

Lee Cloak on March 21, 2015:

A lovely poem, very beautiful, thank you!

Justin W Price from Juneau, Alaska on February 02, 2012:

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excellent work, Kate. I enjoyed this a lot!

Kate P (author) from The North Woods, USA on November 17, 2011:

Thanks so much for all of your comments; I really appreciate the feedback! :)

Shampa Sadhya from NEW DELHI, INDIA on November 17, 2011:

Voted up and beautiful.

A short piece of poem but very meaningful. I really liked it.

Alexander Thandi Ubani from Lagos on November 02, 2011:

Wow! Felt every word as a stab. Great vision and choice of words. Awesome piece of poetry

Debby Bruck on November 01, 2011:

Dear Kate ~ I have hardly even done this, but I gave you TWO RATINGS - awesome and beautiful. So well written, rhymes and sentiment both in sync. Love, Debby P.S. because this was 'extra special' I tweeted to my enormous following.

Johnny Darklight from Cody Wyoming on October 30, 2011:

In your title I was pulled in. I love reflection emotion. I voted you up and beautiful.

epigramman on October 29, 2011:

.....love this hubtastic piece of writing - it's so impressionistic and you have an excellent craft of making words look/read so enticing and beautiful - bravo to you for this one, indeed!

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caitmo1 from Lancashire England on October 29, 2011:

I like it!Voted up and beautiful.

waqxi on October 28, 2011:

I love love the second part its so music

Great job

Waqxi

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