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MY LOVE LETTER - A Poetic Letter

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The Secret To My Heart.....

Dear Darling:

If you know me well you would understand my need to tell you what I feel at this moment right now. You are always inside my mind in my deepest sacred place, but you need to try to simplify the joy and not the race.

I remember your eyes were open wide inside the glowing light and I wonder if you came to me while I slept inside my temple in the night. I guess I will never know if your words are there all along. So, I sometimes like to listen to the words of my favorite song.

I know that you are wondering if this letter is really about love, but darling you are heaven sent the moment you lose your glove. It is always the simple things that capture my hidden heart, not always all of the pleasure that life loses sight of from the start.

But let me tell you this, a kiss is still a kiss and when you touch my lips you will know that there is so much more that will drop you to the floor. It is never about loss or a game of hidden lust, it is always about us and the waves that we discuss.

So I guess one may never know what is deep inside my heart because it takes a magician to unlock it from the start.

Lots Of Love From My Burning Heart........


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Comments

GPAGE (author) from California on November 27, 2012:

thanx! GPAGE

short gal on November 26, 2012:

dis is so sweet

GPAGE (author) from California on July 23, 2012:

Thanx Minnetonka Twin! so glad you enjoyed my poem....Thank you so much for your comment! GPAGE

Linda Rogers from Minnesota on July 22, 2012:

Beautifully written and romantic. Loved the pictures you chose to go with this. I hit many buttons.

GPAGE (author) from California on April 13, 2012:

didasham2004...thank you for your comment. Never saw this until now when I decided to read an old poem I wrote....Best, GPAGE

didasham2004 on December 22, 2010:

wow.....in touch with the soul

GPAGE (author) from California on June 28, 2010:

Thank you rose...that means a lot to me. I truly write from the heart! GPAGE

rose56 on June 28, 2010:

Well writen Gpage. enjoyed this letters very much.I felt the love.

GPAGE (author) from California on June 19, 2010:

Thank you so much Lilian! Wow! This is fantastic....what you write....always appreciate the inspiration!!!!! I plan on writing many stories that will take people away even for a moment in time! Best, G

LilianEden on June 19, 2010:

GPage,

I truly look forward to your book! Your writing and your ability to capture an audience who keeps coming back for more is a sign of things to come. Onward and upward my friend! Your writing speaks comparable to a fine Jazzy piece, a peaceful breath caught in a busy drilling day, a wonderful style - brilliant mind - you're awesome!

Thank you for sharing and if for a moment, whisking us all away from all the mundane and stress around us today...You're a blessing...L

GPAGE (author) from California on June 17, 2010:

prasetio....what a lovely comment to wake up to today. I feel so full of beautiful things, right here and right now....Thank you! You have made me happy and full of light!!!!!! G

GPAGE (author) from California on June 17, 2010:

Thanks Habee! Great seeing you! Glad you enjoyed this......G

prasetio30 from malang-indonesia on June 17, 2010:

I really enjoy your poem, very beautiful my friend. If I have a chance, please let me enter your heart and fill your heart with something beautiful. Which definitely can make you happy, smile and broke into tears. Thank you very much.....:)

Prasetio

Holle Abee from Georgia on June 16, 2010:

Totally enjoyed this!

GPAGE (author) from California on June 16, 2010:

Dean! You are so funny! This really made me giggle......I'm glad I made your girlfriend leave!!!!!! AND I'm glad you read this again and you needed a shower!!!!! ha Gx

cheaptrick from the bridge of sighs on June 16, 2010:

I'm back Again!!

I can't read this anymore!

Cold showers don't Work!

Ice cubes don't Work!

....I'm out of damn cigarettes...

....my girlfriend ...left...

...cause of ...you...

Still love ya though!!!HA!!!

Dean

GPAGE (author) from California on June 16, 2010:

Mr. Sinatra (E)... So happy I moved you enough to jump in a lake!!!!! ha So happy to see you again here! I'm currently working on a fantasy hub.....G

epigramman on June 16, 2010:

back for more because frankly (as in Sinatra) I am insatiable and every time I read this poetic love letter I feel the crazy need to jump into my lake to cool off - and that works out okay because I only live 100 feet away from it - literally!!

GPAGE (author) from California on June 14, 2010:

cheaptrick.....u are too cute and I'm glad you are here! ha

You made me giggle a lot!!!!!! Wouldn't be the same without you here....so let's hear some more of your love stories!!!!! ; OH BABY!!!!!! Oh by the way, I love it when men are brave and not walking on eggshells around me....even virtually!!!!!!! ha G

cheaptrick from the bridge of sighs on June 14, 2010:

After LGods response,there's nothing left to say!...except

OH BABY,OH BABY,OH BABY!!!

....now I need a smoke...

love ya

Dean

GPAGE (author) from California on June 13, 2010:

Kaie....thank you for stopping in and making me feel good. So glad you enjoyed this.....G

GPAGE (author) from California on June 13, 2010:

Pamela...thank you so much for letting me know that you liked my poetic letter.

It really means a lot to me. G

GPAGE (author) from California on June 13, 2010:

Captain Heart & Soul.....my lovely one.....I'm so glad that I put a big smile on your face!

I did have a lovely Sunday and even better because you said so!!!! Hugs to you....Gx

Kaie Arwen on June 13, 2010:

Your poetry is absolutely beautiful........... thanks for this- Kaie

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on June 13, 2010:

GPAGE, This is another very beautiful poetic letter. You write beautifully. Rated up!

TattoGuy on June 13, 2010:

Captain Tat of the Heart and Soul, now that deff has put a lil smile on moi face, enjoy yer Sunday moi lil G, muchness hugs x

GPAGE (author) from California on June 12, 2010:

LGod.....I never felt anything other then what you meant.....I knew exactly what you were doing......please keep the thoughts and words coming!!!!......your passion moved me and still does.......u are my "Virtual Romeo." AND you made me bite my lip ; ha

sooo very lovely......I sent you a message.....G

lemmyisgod on June 12, 2010:

Hi G - I am flattered by your comments. After I wrote it I thought you might think I was some kind of weirdo stalking you! I was just responding to the passion in your words which moved me in equal measure. You are special - my heart was pounding after I read your poem. My response was really a result of imagining how I thought I might respond if I received such a letter. I'm glad your heart still burns with passion and my words didn't freeze you in a bad way! Glad I could move you like that I'll try my best to find the words that will make you bite your lip as the hairs stand up on the back of your neck again sometime! ;-)

GPAGE (author) from California on June 12, 2010:

HH! Thank you so much for the inspiration!!!!! I felt so passionate when I wrote this....thank you always for being here making me feel good about being "me." G

GPAGE (author) from California on June 12, 2010:

epigramman....you are like the biggest present ever!!!! You love shines through in every word......your romantic heart is magical....thank you so much for making me feel like I am making a difference.......I LOVE flowers!!!!! Thank you!!! G

GPAGE (author) from California on June 12, 2010:

Captain TAT of the HEART and SOUL......you always make me feel loved and I so appreciate who you are on a very deep level......lovezya lots!!.......u know that ofcourse.....Gx

epigramman on June 12, 2010:

this is one 'lucky' darling that you speak of - is it Frank Sinatra?

I always feel like one lucky darling when I come here - it's like a poetic oasis which soothes my mind and caresses my soul!

A flower for you today as I kneel in front of you!

TattoGuy on June 12, 2010:

Love this almost as much as I love you G, but hey, that wud be impossible ; ) x

Tracy Morrow from Cleveland, OH on June 12, 2010:

I think you are deeper than the ocean G, I love this piece! it should be set to the most heavenly, evocative music.

GPAGE (author) from California on June 11, 2010:

LGod.....I have lost my breath! I will take this in and then write a response in a bit.....beautiful....stunning..............you have made me freeze.......lovely. G

lemmyisgod on June 11, 2010:

Like a thief in the night I will unpick your lock before tiptoeing from your room trying not to make the stairs creak as I sneak away.

In the morning when you awake to warm sheets and the smell of my body on your pillows only you will know exactly what it is that has been stolen.

Another stunning hub G. What a writer. Beautiful.

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