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Love Hard



Burning kiss

passions flame.

Take me wild

and untamed.

Rough me up,

love me down.

In your arms

I will drown.

Hurt me gently,

love me sweet.

Bodies boiling,

feel the heat.

Steal my breath,

smother me.

Cut me open

set me free.

Pressure building

deep inside.

Release it in

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Erotic tides.

Abuse my body

with loving eyes.

Stab me softly

until passion dies.

Hold me tightly

in the end.

Until I'm ready

to die again.


4elements (author) on September 04, 2012:

your welcome.

Johnnybgood on September 01, 2012:

I get a different feeling every times read it thanks I just need to

4elements (author) on August 11, 2012:

Thank you Docmo, I enjoy writing feelings and emotions. I try to capture each one. I appreciate the comment, blessings

Mohan Kumar from UK on August 10, 2012:

oh wow. i like this fast, sensual rhythmic union that captures the intimacy of such so well. The lean simplicity of this poem is adorned with great visual imagery. Awesome. weirdly enough i am holidaying in Florida and keep discovering more and more hubbers who live here!

4elements (author) on August 09, 2012:

Thank you crescent I appreciate the comment. Blessings

4elements (author) on August 07, 2012:

Thank you writer 20, and johnbgood. I appreciate the comments

Joyce Haragsim from Southern Nevada on August 07, 2012:

Great romantic poem. You wrote so well.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

Johnbgood on August 07, 2012:

This one was awesome Keep it up thank you

misc-disc from Greater Earth Area on August 07, 2012:

Impeccable rhythm; very good.

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