Take me wild
Rough me up,
love me down.
In your arms
I will drown.
Hurt me gently,
love me sweet.
feel the heat.
Steal my breath,
Cut me open
set me free.
Release it in
Abuse my body
with loving eyes.
Stab me softly
until passion dies.
Hold me tightly
in the end.
Until I'm ready
to die again.
4elements (author) on September 04, 2012:
Johnnybgood on September 01, 2012:
I get a different feeling every times read it thanks I just need to
4elements (author) on August 11, 2012:
Thank you Docmo, I enjoy writing feelings and emotions. I try to capture each one. I appreciate the comment, blessings
Mohan Kumar from UK on August 10, 2012:
oh wow. i like this fast, sensual rhythmic union that captures the intimacy of such so well. The lean simplicity of this poem is adorned with great visual imagery. Awesome. weirdly enough i am holidaying in Florida and keep discovering more and more hubbers who live here!
4elements (author) on August 09, 2012:
Thank you crescent I appreciate the comment. Blessings
4elements (author) on August 07, 2012:
Thank you writer 20, and johnbgood. I appreciate the comments
Joyce Haragsim from Southern Nevada on August 07, 2012:
Great romantic poem. You wrote so well.
Voted up and awesome, Joyce.
Johnbgood on August 07, 2012:
This one was awesome Keep it up thank you
misc-disc from Greater Earth Area on August 07, 2012:
Impeccable rhythm; very good.