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Eyes Wide Open

Crystal Is a 36-year-old mother of 3, She loves to inspire others and she has been writing for over 18 years. She loves all and judges None.

I see clearly the things you do. Can you believe this I feel like the fool? All the pain I let you put me through. I feel as if you never saw past you. I used to think things would get better. I thought you could prove that to me sooner or later. False dreams and broken promises. Our relationship wasn't built on trust. Only because you were so dishonest. This is what you made for us. I got tired of all the late-night and lies, so did you I could see it in your eyes.

If you were so unhappy why didn't you just leave? Instead of staying out there creeping around on me. I loved you at some point this you knew, but now I'm living my life without you, and I can honestly say I'm feeling brand new.

My eyes are wide open, I just want to say thank you.

Comments

lamont jones on November 23, 2020:

that was electric in a bottle!!

Tee on August 09, 2020:

Preach!!

Brook on July 29, 2020:

Amazing

Kim on July 22, 2019:

This hit home, so raw

Stewart on August 17, 2018:

Sounds like u said this to me

Ginger on August 05, 2018:

Raw Emotion flawless

Oricle on August 05, 2018:

Have you published any of these? Your very good.

Secret admire on August 04, 2018:

Love it

Steven on November 18, 2014:

Wow!!!!

chantelle on August 21, 2014:

Loved it when can we see more

kesha on August 20, 2014:

Truly from the heart . Those are the best poems to read. Yours are very interesting thank you for sharing

Jennifer on August 18, 2014:

I sure hope that the person that put you through that pain has grown to see the beautiful person you have become

Michelle on August 08, 2014:

Very nice crystal keep up the great work.

Alison on August 08, 2014:

Crystal what a great poem keep writing and don't ever give up don't let any won else tell you other wise

Courtney Hughs on August 07, 2014:

Your poems show great emotions. Your poems show love and devotion. Wanted to say thank-you for giving us something to read. Your great keep them coming. Have you ever thought about writing a book of poems.

GReg Sutherland on August 06, 2014:

I didn't think that you was this Good, they say don't judge a book by it's cover and That's most definitely the case with you.

Crystal Hubbard (author) from Jacksonville, Florida on August 06, 2014:

Thank you so much for your feedback

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on August 06, 2014:

Hi Crystal, your expressions are touching! You may consider lengthening your articles (to the length HP likes) and as Teaches suggests, adding some pictures. You're on your way to making a name for yourself here.

Crystal Hubbard (author) from Jacksonville, Florida on August 05, 2014:

Thanks to all my fans

Catherine James on August 05, 2014:

I absolutely love it ten thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!★★★★

Thomas Peery on August 05, 2014:

WOW! That poem is really good keep bringing those poems from the heart and you'll soon have your own book of poems out. Love it.

Jo Alexis-Hagues from Lincolnshire, U.K on August 05, 2014:

The pain and the ecstasy of love, we must know one to recognise the other. Very emotive piece.

Crystal Hubbard (author) from Jacksonville, Florida on August 04, 2014:

Thank you so very much for the advice will do thank you again.

Dianna Mendez on August 04, 2014:

I imagine there are readers who can relate to the emotional turmoil in your poem. I hate that people have to experience such broken hearted situations. Your posts would help readers connect visually if you added some photo posts to your poetry, just a thought. You have talent!

deborahshannon on August 04, 2014:

Your writings come from the heart. I hope you have found your true love.

Great Poem!!!

Melissa on August 04, 2014:

So glade to see more poems.I thank this is a great.I hope to see a lot more from you.I will check back. You write with your feelings that's good.Keep up the good work.

Tina Martin on August 04, 2014:

Thank you so much for getting more poetry on here. Your writing speaks to me you truly are a beautiful soul

Andrea White on August 04, 2014:

I like it nice

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