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Dawn Comes, a Haiku Poem

Laura is a technical writer. She enjoys playing the piano, traveling, fine art, and making jewelry.

Did you like this little Haiku?

Dawn Comes, Slowly

Dawn Comes, Slowly

Dawn Comes, Slowly

Dawn Comes, a Haiku Poem

~ ~ ~


The dark

in the morning

covers the world around

and I wait

for the sun

to come

to life


~ ~ ~

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Comments

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 01, 2014:

Haha okay, then I shall keep my secret, at least for now.

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on April 01, 2014:

I see the first comment was 11 months ago, so I guess it's older than that, but I have just found you so it doesn't matter.

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Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 01, 2014:

Thanks! I'm trying to decide if I should confess how long ago I wrote that or let it stand as-is. Your thoughts, everyone?

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on March 31, 2014:

This poem describes perfectly the coming of dawn in so few words. Well done Laura.

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on October 09, 2013:

cleaner3/Michael--I'm flattered! Thanks for following me and I hope my work lives up to your expectations. Cheers! --LS

cleaner3 from Pueblo, Colorado on July 31, 2013:

beautiful... glad I saw your remark on Faith's post .. Now I have found you and want to see "your work"

this is where I want to go eventually... but I like to try new forms ..

Michael

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 23, 2013:

Good morning, Sunny River just north of Reality! Thank you so much for commenting on my little haiku. Every once in awhile something will just get under my skin and I know it will come out through writing, like my appreciation for the lovely start to each new day in this little poem.

Sunny River from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality on April 22, 2013:

Loved it. Sunrise is one of my favorite times of the day.

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 12, 2013:

Thank you so much for your generous praise, pstraubie48, and for voting and sharing this little poem further. You have a lovely weekend, too, and thanks for the angels! :-)

Patricia Scott from North Central Florida on April 12, 2013:

Love this....every day, waiting for the sun to 'come to life' so another new day can spring forth and open itself to me. Awesome.

Thanks for sharing Voted up and shared

Have a lovely weekend

Sending Angels your way :) ps

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 11, 2013:

Thank you, wetnosedogs! I like all kinds of poems when I'm reading them, but somehow the simple meaningful ones are the ones that stick in my head and still mean the most to me a week or year later. Have a great evening! Thanks for commenting!

Laura Schneider (author) from Minnesota, USA on April 11, 2013:

Thanks, DDE! I appreciate you stopping to leave a comment. Cheers!

wetnosedogs from Alabama on April 11, 2013:

Simple and great. Love it.

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on April 11, 2013:

The sun brightens the day a lovely meaning to this poem.

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