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Dark Angel

Poetry brings Solace,,, I know about that now. This words contains all the things that I can't afford to utter.


Dark Angel

Worthless as they say

Matters most to me

He lingers through my days

and feeds on sentiments you see

Don't get close, Don't get attached

He's an angel who lost his track

You might get hurt

You might get burn

But he'll be with you

Til the day you say "I hate you"

Explore thy scars

Hear his agony,

See the soul within

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He's neither the danger or the player of your game

Hence , a rose who's trying to protect his name

Keep him, Hold on to him

He'll give you the sweetest memory

And everything will never be the same

© 2019 Jai Hitachiin


Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on June 01, 2019:

An angel is always a miracle, no matter the colour! A powerful one, my dear Jai, I loved it!

My love embraces you!


Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on May 31, 2019:

Hi, that comment wnet to your poem, and it still stands true. Your poetry has it rightg. Bless your talent.

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on May 30, 2019:

Hi, Mark,

Today, I thank those guys. Writing lyrics for the quarterback to go rap to his cheerleader sweetheart to a Berry White tune really encouraged me to learn more about poetry - Now, I can recognize a brilliant poet such as yourself because these guys encouraged me to study poetry. Sweet, beautiful, irony.

Your poem has it right. Great job, insightful friend across our nation.



Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on May 30, 2019:

Hi, JaiAsahi23,

Wonderful poem. Dark angels dance around us, but we carry the light to even brighten their darkness. I like the fact you emphasized we shouldn't let ourselves be pulled in. Thank you again. Respectfully, Tim

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