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Broken Promises: Broken Heart Haiku Poems

Jo has been an ITU nurse at the London North West NHS Trust for 14 years. She obtained her RN at University College London Hospital.

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Love Lies Bleeding

A river of tears

Can't wash away the heartache

When love lies bleeding


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Relationship dies

A heart Fatally wounded

Love devoid of trust


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Secret rendezvous

Stolen moment's ecstasy-

Lifetime of Regrets

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Comments

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 10, 2012:

Rahul, so nice to see you, always an honour. Thank you for the visit and comment.

All my best wishes to you

Jessee R from Gurgaon, India on June 09, 2012:

The Haikus are brilliant.. the tale you tell is woven with heartbreak and pain..

Great write my friend.. great write

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 08, 2012:

Lesley, many thanks, much appreciated.

Movie Master from United Kingdom on June 08, 2012:

Hi tobusiness, fabulous haiku's and I love Leona's song!

Voting up

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Laurinzo, welcome, and thank you so much for the visit and the beautiful comment. All my best to you.

LJ Scott from Phoenix, Az. on June 07, 2012:

After reading your earlier comment I was inspired to read your haiku... one word... Beautiful!

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Hi Max, So glad you liked it, they do say what doesn't kill you... appreciate the visit and comment. all the best.

BeyondMax from Sydney, Australia on June 07, 2012:

Jo, it's amazing! Beautifully portrayed pain and sadness of the broken wings of love...

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Unknown, I am so glad you were touched by this,many thanks for the visit and comment. Have a brilliant day.

Life Under Construction from Neverland on June 07, 2012:

the first line captured my heart..and until the end. simply so amazing!

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Frank, so glad you liked it, all the best.

Voronwe, thank you for the wonderful comment, I don't believe Leona received the credit she deserved, but yes I love this song. Hope you're having a wonderful day, all the best.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on June 07, 2012:

sadly beautiful tobus...

Voronwe on June 07, 2012:

Powerful expressions here! "When love lies bleeding..." Great haiku. The presentation is amazing. The pictures you choose always provide the perfect backdrop. Leona Lewis's Bleeding Love shall always remain a great song!

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Thanks Angel, so thrilled to know you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day.

Angelme566 on June 07, 2012:

This is so beautiful and so true ..not even a million, it's more than that...

I love haiku and these makes my day ! Voted all ..

p.s. pics are aweee..

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 07, 2012:

Angelo52, many thanks fo the visit and comment, have a lovely day.

Mhatter99, sweet memories indeed, sometime when the tears are falling it is hard to think beyond it. Thank you for the lovely comment and the visit. Best wishes.

Martin Kloess from San Francisco on June 06, 2012:

let each teardrop be

an everlasting promise

for sweet memories

Angelo52 on June 06, 2012:

Great haikus. A lot of expression for just 17 syllables.

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 06, 2012:

Dean, welcome and thank you very much for the insightful comment, much appreciated.

Dean Traylor from Southern California/Spokane, Washington (long story) on June 06, 2012:

this is a multi-media delight. I love how the words of the haikus interact with the pictures and video presented here. These days you really have to do a lot to get someone's attention. This was successful.

Jo Alexis-Hagues (author) from Lincolnshire, U.K on June 06, 2012:

Ruchira, thank you so much, I'm very happy to know you enjoyed it.

All my best.

Ruchira from United States on June 06, 2012:

gosh it's heart rendering just to read it and i can imagine what actually goes inside a broken heart.

well captured via this beautiful haiku.

voted up indeed and pressed beautiful button