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Blue - Haiku

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Rinita is a creative writer, with focus on poetry. She delves into several forms including Haiku/Senryu, Sonnets, Free Verse, and Prose.

Background

This Haiku is about that moment during the frozen winter, when you are surrounded by room heating yet you feel a chill within yourself, which turns you blue, much like how your finger nails turn blue in wind chills.

Haiku

Frost bite sets within

Fake warmth outside misty glass

Heart and nails turn blue

© 2011 Rinita Sen

Comments

Rinita Sen (author) on October 21, 2020:

Thank you Brenda. Appreciate your visit and thoughts.

Rinita Sen (author) on October 21, 2020:

I understand completely, Bill. Please don't worry about it. I've missed commenting on so many recent articles because I couldn't get there soon enough. I hope they fix this.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on October 20, 2020:

Very true words.

One can get a false sense with that fake warmth.

Great Haiku.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on October 20, 2020:

I was going to comment on your latest post, but I was too late. It wouldn't let me now that it's on the niche site. Sorry about that. I'll try to be faster in commenting in the future.

Rinita Sen (author) on June 20, 2019:

Audrey, thank you. Your comment and visit are much appreciated.

Audrey Hunt from Pahrump NV on June 02, 2019:

Your words come to life. Thank you for the subject that I totally relate too. Well done!

Rinita Sen (author) on March 01, 2012:

Ah! Thanks Charles. I hope the bitter frosty days are over wherever you live.

Charles Hilton on February 29, 2012:

Lovely! And I can so relate. lol

Rinita Sen (author) on February 09, 2012:

Appreciate that beautiful comment Vinaya.

Vinaya Ghimire from Nepal on February 09, 2012:

You capture the time that is passing by.

Rinita Sen (author) on January 25, 2012:

Thanks a lot sofs. Your comment is much appreciated.

Sophie on January 25, 2012:

This is an awesome piece and the picture is perfect!

Rinita Sen (author) on December 31, 2011:

Hi Susan. Hopefully the warmth of the coming year will succeed in reducing the bitterness of the cold. Thanks for visiting. :)

Susan Zutautas from Ontario, Canada on December 31, 2011:

I can feel the cold. Lovely Haiku.

Rinita Sen (author) on December 30, 2011:

Sue, Kole, and Audrey: Thank you so much for your heartfelt wishes. Wish you a very happy new year.

Audrey Howitt from California on December 30, 2011:

I love the idea of a haiku to set up the new year--Happy new year to you!!

kole69 on December 30, 2011:

?????? Happy New Year Senoritaa ??????

Sueswan on December 30, 2011:

A Happy New Year to you Senoritaa :-)

Rinita Sen (author) on December 29, 2011:

Sincerely appreciate your comment Sueswan. Wish you a happy new year.

Sueswan on December 29, 2011:

Hi Senoritaa

Amazing Imagery!

Voted up and away!

Take care

Rinita Sen (author) on December 29, 2011:

Thank you so much Eddy.

Eiddwen from Wales on December 29, 2011:

Brilliant once more !!!!

Take care my friend,

Eddy.

Rinita Sen (author) on December 27, 2011:

I know, right? The harsh reality of winter. Thanks a ton for visiting ExoticHippieQueen.

ExoticHippieQueen on December 27, 2011:

I feel the chill, I feel the blue. Good, very good.

Rinita Sen (author) on December 22, 2011:

I know. That's the power of Haiku. So much can be said in so little words. Thanks for visiting raciniwa

raciniwa from Talisay City, Cebu on December 22, 2011:

short but lives an impression in the mind...

Rinita Sen (author) on December 21, 2011:

Thanks again for reading :)

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on December 21, 2011:

Lovely, I love it...

Rinita Sen (author) on December 21, 2011:

Thanks kole.

kole69 on December 21, 2011:

Nice :D

Rinita Sen (author) on December 19, 2011:

Audrey, arusho, and V: Thanks for visiting. Your encouragements mean a lot.

V Qisya on December 19, 2011:

Lovely! I loved it, Senoritaa. Take care.

Best Wishes, V

arusho from University Place, Wa. on December 19, 2011:

very nice

Audrey Howitt from California on December 19, 2011:

Nice write!

Rinita Sen (author) on December 19, 2011:

Thank you chrisam. Appreciate your comment.

chrisam01 from Los Angeles, California, USA on December 19, 2011:

Beautiful. I think the picture goes nicely with your poem too!

Rinita Sen (author) on December 19, 2011:

Thank you Frank.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on December 19, 2011:

very nice :)

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