The Unknown
Chrish is a poetry writer who loves to paint, nature and dog lover, who write for herself and happy to share it with you.
The Unknown
Deluxe cave|from Pinterest
Trying to conceal what has been
Done, it helps nowt but bruises
Beyond wretched smiling aura
You were my favorite unknown along
With your clouded accursed mourning
Skies,
My heart could stop fluttering
Whenever I saw your tears falling
From your cheeks,
We both love to hoist ourselves
Up to the highest mountains of
Unknown, where we both love
Listening the undisturbed tranquility
Of beating hearts, while the sun slowly
Settling in.
I heard you murmured in
a solemn sound, while the universe
In its motionless tranquility
A very comfortable one,
It was as if I could stop the
World from pacing, the rivers from
Flowing,
The waves from raging and
The wind from whispering,
So I won't hear nothing but
You,
I Won't see anything but
You.
To retrospect where you once was
Admired, with your comfort and
Being cloistered,
Where I was once substantially
Believed will last.
Watching you paced in helpless
Exhaust unfold disposition on
Sunday rainy morning, where I knew
The end of our days was about
To reach us,
you were just like
A mist ambled across the way,
Where you said you are
Supposed to.
Comments
Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:
Awesome!!!! I'm glad you found it beautiful my dear sister Misbah. And God bless you too and your family, I'm sending lots of love hugs and kisses.
When are we going to meet so we can really give each other a big hugs kisses and lots of love? Hopefully wink.
Misbah Sheikh from "a Serene Land" (This Existence Is an Illusion) on April 15, 2021:
Beautiful poetry, Chrish. Full of emotions. I loved these lines,
The waves from raging and
The wind from whispering,
So I won't hear nothing but
You,
I Won't see anything but
You.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem
God bless you always dear sister
Peace and Love
Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 15, 2021:
I did Some special makeover in my first piece "dramatic poetry" Hope you like it!!!! Wink wink .....
Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on November 10, 2020:
Oh Ms Brenda, absolutely that!
Light words(its like I love reading and writing mournful lines) I dunno but I myself consider it as a beautiful art in life. Thanks a lot again Ms Brenda
A bunge of love from the Philippines ;-)
Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on November 10, 2020:
My pleasure Sir Holland :-) thank you as well.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on November 10, 2020:
I sense sadness and betrayal in these words. A person once loved and trusted now a hurtful reminder of the times.
Hiding bruises to continue an outward appearance of a life unknown.
Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on November 10, 2020:
I salute you for writing poetry. Our society needs more poets in this world. Poets bring beauty to our world and for that I thank you.
Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on August 19, 2020:
Thanks for the visit.
Much love
