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The Unknown

Chrish is a poetry writer who loves to paint, nature and dog lover, who write for herself and happy to share it with you.

The Unknown

-the-unknown

Trying to conceal what has been

Done, it helps nowt but bruises

Beyond wretched smiling aura

You were my favorite unknown along

With your clouded accursed mourning

Skies,


My heart could stop fluttering

Whenever I saw your tears falling

From your cheeks,


We both love to hoist ourselves

Up to the highest mountains of

Unknown, where we both love

Listening the undisturbed tranquility

Of beating hearts, while the sun slowly

Settling in.


I heard you murmured in

a solemn sound, while the universe

In its motionless tranquility

A very comfortable one,


It was as if I could stop the

World from pacing, the rivers from

Flowing,

The waves from raging and

The wind from whispering,

So I won't hear nothing but

You,

I Won't see anything but

You.


To retrospect where you once was

Admired, with your comfort and

Being cloistered,

Where I was once substantially

Believed will last.


Watching you paced in helpless

Exhaust unfold disposition on

Sunday rainy morning, where I knew

The end of our days was about

To reach us,

you were just like

A mist ambled across the way,

Where you said you are

Supposed to.

Comments

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

Awesome!!!! I'm glad you found it beautiful my dear sister Misbah. And God bless you too and your family, I'm sending lots of love hugs and kisses.

When are we going to meet so we can really give each other a big hugs kisses and lots of love? Hopefully wink.

Misbah from The Planet Earth on April 15, 2021:

Beautiful poetry, Chrish. Full of emotions. I loved these lines,

The waves from raging and

The wind from whispering,

So I won't hear nothing but

You,

I Won't see anything but

You.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem

God bless you always dear sister

Peace and Love

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 15, 2021:

I did Some special makeover in my first piece "dramatic poetry" Hope you like it!!!! Wink wink .....

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on November 10, 2020:

Oh Ms Brenda, absolutely that!

Light words(its like I love reading and writing mournful lines) I dunno but I myself consider it as a beautiful art in life. Thanks a lot again Ms Brenda

A bunge of love from the Philippines ;-)

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on November 10, 2020:

My pleasure Sir Holland :-) thank you as well.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on November 10, 2020:

I sense sadness and betrayal in these words. A person once loved and trusted now a hurtful reminder of the times.

Hiding bruises to continue an outward appearance of a life unknown.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on November 10, 2020:

I salute you for writing poetry. Our society needs more poets in this world. Poets bring beauty to our world and for that I thank you.

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on August 19, 2020:

Thanks for the visit.

Much love

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